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Re: Change One Letter
cell
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Revolve
I actually really liked that, and I can see the format for it being like a tornado. I didn't really see any gramicarial errors either, but I think that I ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: One big, not-so-happy family.
wow, I really liked that. It had lot's of good rhyming most of the time. Very good flow too. But I actually don't think you need to add "the" before ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: It's a slip up, but it's real.
You call me a faker, And a liar too. You say I just want attention. So my emotions aren’t real. You’re right, I do fake my emotions, I lie about ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: This Pen is Retired
The title really caught my attention with this peice, but I do have to agree that in the first stanza it sounds like the pen will be back, but in ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Impossible
That was good. I mean wow, I think that it really portrade a feeling, and I don't think that the rythme was messed up at all, or that it was ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Loneliness
That was amazing. I don't think I've ever read anything like that, but wow, it was amazzing. Slightly cramped in the first stanza and really short in the second, but ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Gone
I liked it, a lot. I haven't actually read the entire diary, but I do know quite a bit about it. And I think that you really just did a ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Writer's Inspiration
EDIT: Double post, sorry don't know how that happened.
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Writer's Inspiration
Oh. My. Gosh. That was amazing. No joke, I swear that was so true that you have just made my day insanly awesome. I didn't notice any typo's or anything ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Remaining In The Past
Over all, I liked it. I can agree that it might have needed to have a little more to it. But it was consistant, and even though it didn;'t have ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Accidentally Famous: Prologue
I found it! Thanks for the PM telling me about this. This defently adds, I dunno, It kinda makes you want to read more (I forgot what I was supposed ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia
I thought that it was funny, all of the poetry I write is really I dunno, the oppisite of this, and I think that Its YWS has at least some ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Accidentaly Famous Ch1.1
I thought that it was really good, I did notice that there was a few typos here and there, but honestly not that many. You gave good descriptions of the ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: (Unofficial Title) Costume Changes
Preface Veronica His look was creepy and it was easy for me to tell, he was a street kid. Like I had been so many years ago. As though we ...
Mar 1, 2009